Movie Mondays

Fun weekly videos to help nonprofits raise money, steward donors, and inspire board members

  • Sign Up for Free Videos
  • Sponsors
    • Nonprofit Best Practices
    • Nonprofit Storytelling Conference
    • 501 Videos
  • Video Archives
  • Shop
  • FAQ

The four rules of good fundraising writing

Episode #225

Does better writing equal better fundraising? 

When I sat down and talked with Stuart Grover, he started telling me about how important good writing was to fundraising.  Since he’s one of the most successful fundraisers I know, I had to ask him for some writing tips.

In today’s video, Stuart shares four of the rules he follows when writing fundraising appeals and letters.

If you have any stories or advice on writing fundraising letters or appeals, please share them in a comment box under the video.  Your nonprofit friends will appreciate it.

Learn to write better fundraising stories.
Come to the Nonprofit Storytelling Conference.
Click here.

Also, if you’re not already a Movie Mondays subscriber, sign up for your own free subscription so you won’t miss out on future movies. Click here for Your FREE subscription to Movie Mondays.

For your own free subscription to Movie Mondays, click here.

Comments

  1. Christopher Davenport says

    March 4, 2013 at 6:09 am

    If you have any stories or advice on writing fundraising letters or appeals, please share them in a comment box. Your nonprofit friends will appreciate it. 🙂

    Reply
  2. Cyndi Desrosiers says

    March 4, 2013 at 2:06 pm

    I agree with most of what is said, however would add Integrity and Passion ~ it has worked for me!

    Reply
  3. Bryan Freeman says

    March 4, 2013 at 3:17 pm

    Thank you Stuart!

    You don’t know how many times I have sat ans stared at the screen of blank and thinking to myself what do I put now. I also appreciate your humor advice here as well. Although humour is a good thing, I would have never used it the way you pointed it out. Ouch!

    For a good reference on using humor though, see Gostick and Christopher’s Book, The Levity Effect. It give a great set of rules and eays to liven up presentations, emails and phone messages without going overboard, and hitting that humor “sweet” spot. However, knowing your audience is truly essential.

    Thanks for a great video!

    Reply
  4. Steven Lambright says

    March 4, 2013 at 4:47 pm

    I agree. Good writing is paramount. Passion is also very important in fundraising. If you are not passionate about what you are asking someone else to support, then you need to find something else to do. That being said, passion can also get you into trouble if not put in check. Make sure your passion does not override your good sense. Always be professional! This guy got it right that what is put out there represents who you are as an organization. Comedy is not a good thing in writing, often people will not understand that you are joking.

    Reply
  5. Dale says

    March 4, 2013 at 8:32 pm

    Sure we don’t want to make mistakes. But don’t be so fearful that you don’t push the envelope. Being safe is boring, and doesn’t bring in strong results. If you don’t fail some of the time, you aren’t trying hard enough! We have a motto where I work: Fail fast and move on.

    Reply
  6. Dawn Carmichael says

    March 6, 2013 at 7:19 pm

    I enjoyed the video. I too have sat and stared at a blank screen trying to start out just the right way. When in fact, what I heard was just get it down and out of my head, then go back and rearrange and edit.

    Thank you,

    Reply
  7. M R Porter says

    November 25, 2019 at 8:46 am

    If you would just edit yourself, you’d save a Lot of people a Lot of time!

    Reply

Leave a ReplyCancel reply

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

Nonprofit Storytelling Conference

Discover how to raise more money by telling better stories.

Go to: Nonprofit Storytelling Conference

Storytelling Book Series

Nonprofit Storytelling Book Series - Click here Raise more money
Learn how to find, capture, and tell powerful stories that inspire donors to give. Get these 3 books for one low price. Click here.
Ad
Nonprofit Best Practices Complete RAISE MONEY FASTER
Over 500 videos, tutorials, and action guides are waiting to help you raise more money faster.  Click here.

Terms of Service  |  Privacy Policy

Copyright © 2025 · Generate Pro Theme on Genesis Framework · WordPress · Log in